I've been reading your stories for a while (I adore Pillow Talk and the Tales from the Pantry about Kevin, by the way) but I always forget to comment. I HAD to write something with this one, though. I love the slightly creepy "horror-movie" feel you created as Julia realizes that Lizzie knows and she recognizes the similarities they've all been trying to ignore. If possible, I'd love to see more of this (Lizzie confronting Kevin or Scotty, perhaps, or something from her perspective on how she figured it out)!